Saturday, January 14, 2012

I began to create this idea about writing a plot. Does this sound like a good idea, and not a copycat?

So i picked a couple of celebrities that would be good together. Lindsay Lohan and ashton kutcher. Dont judge my plot if u dont like lindsay just think of the plot itself. I love lindsay myself she is a great actress besides the media. I have this idea and i dont want it to seem like a copycat and its hard to stay origional since pretty much every possible love story has already been created with a twist and hopefully this doesnt sound like how to loose a guy in 10 days i want it to be way different then that have no relation at all. Basically im setting up the scene and then the dialogue begins. Lindsay (Megan) is a sophomore in college, she is running late to class and has a speech that morning so she had to dress up. But before she got to class she stopped at the nearest starbucks to grab a coffee and muffin. Anyways this Ashton (not picked name yet help me out one that sounds hot with megan) was in line next to her their was a fist fight, which caused him to ram into her. But before i continue, ashton is secretly rich and in hollywood he got hired to act in a movie but be in real life, so their are secret cameras that allow him to film and on the way he has to pick up girls and actors to be in his movie. He never told (Megan) that he was rich or this whole time filming a movie. So this hole dilemma begins. She falls in love with him naturally for an average city guy (keep in mind she never knew that he was rich and filming for a movie w/o her consent). He takes her to this cabin up north that he has and then begins to cheat on her and she finds out sooner or later and falls getting hurt and he wasnt there for her. basically later on as the time goes on he eventually tells her that she was being in this movie this hole time. So she realizes that her life was screwed over and wasted. Hell have engaged to her for the movie bt he also means it in real life and she is confused. This is what i created, tell me what u think of it? Also if i write a plot in dialogue tell me how long should it be if its on notebook? Thanks.I began to create this idea about writing a plot. Does this sound like a good idea, and not a copycat?
I'm not gonna lie, everything about this sounds terrible.

You spent a considerable amount of time explaining to us that you chose second rate entertainers to star in your project.

You spent twice as much time trying to explain to us how this totally isn't a ripoff of every other chick flick even though it totally sounds like it.

Then there's the plot, that makes even less sense. Nothing about the story you're telling sounds entertaining. How is she completely in the dark about being in a movie the entire time when that would require cameras, lights, microphones, stagehands, and everything involved in making a movie?

The ending isn't an ending. "She's confused" leaves me confused.



But please, don't stop developing this story. Just don't kid yourself into thinking you're close to being done with your idea.I began to create this idea about writing a plot. Does this sound like a good idea, and not a copycat?
Using real people as characters is illegal.

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